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Paul Randall
05-28-2011, 04:24 AM
Striated Fieldwren
Werribee, VIC, Australia

These birds have a simple, repetitive song that they sing from the tallest perch amongst coastal salt bush.

Canon 5D 600mm f4 L (non IS) + 1.4 TC iso 400 1/1250th f8.0 CW metering at +0 handheld
Photoshop- slight sharpen and clone out of leaves at bottom right of frame

Gary Esman
05-28-2011, 07:16 AM
Hi Paul, nice shot. I like the background, open beak and pose. Might crop up from the bottom just a tad because it is OOF. very nice.

Gary.

Jim Crosswell
05-28-2011, 08:28 AM
I like the pose, perch, sharpness and BG. I would consider a crop like Gary suggested. Beautiful image Paul!

Ofer Levy
05-28-2011, 09:59 AM
Very nice! Another vote for cropping the first oof cluster of leaves.

Dave Leroy
05-28-2011, 10:05 AM
Lovely image. Colours are very complimentary and pose is excellent.

I like the nice vertical presentation but agree that the oof in bottom would be best cropped out for a bit squatter photo.

Dave

Neil Nourse
05-28-2011, 10:45 AM
I really like this shot.. Love the background, nice and sharp,good HA. I do also agree about cropping up from the bottom.

TFS Neil

Austin Thomas
05-28-2011, 01:31 PM
I like this a lot. Subject and BKGR are excellent.

I would crop some from the bottom keeping some of the brown BKGR in the image.

Cheers

Austin

Arthur Morris
05-28-2011, 03:33 PM
A very lovely vertical rule of thirds with the perfect head angle. The bird looks a bit like a thin-billed Lincoln's Sparrow. Light sweet and soft, SH right on, and a loverly BKGR.

Humberto Ramos
05-28-2011, 04:38 PM
Great shot, lovely BG, perch and bird. I think that an f/11 would make a huge difference in the perch below, just don't know if the BG would be that amazing with f/11....

Daniel Cadieux
05-28-2011, 07:40 PM
Excellent comp!! Love the pose and the BG is just too sweet. Did you clone out something in LRC?...seems like there is a faint pale circle there suggesting just that...

Robert Holguin
05-29-2011, 02:05 AM
Wonderful shot, great perch, fantastic pose, and tack sharp. Well done.

Leo Berzins
05-29-2011, 03:34 AM
Beautiful image Paul.
Nice pose, perch and background.

Paul Randall
05-30-2011, 12:26 AM
Thanks for the replies all, crop suggestion makes sense for sure. Yes, leaves cloned out of bottom right corner as noted in photoshop notes in my original post :w3