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mortezanemati
05-20-2011, 02:12 PM
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Hi
My first post in this forum is.
I hope you take interest.
Thanks!

Kerry Perkins
05-21-2011, 05:21 PM
Hello, I am not seeing your image. Do you need help posting?

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
05-21-2011, 09:30 PM
I can see your image (but there are some images that other can see but I couldn't)...

Very nice pose by the bird, love how it raise its tail up. Very nice details in the black, except at the bottom part of the bird that is in shadow, maybe fill flash will help with that or lower sun angle. I don't mind that one leg is block by the rock, but the OOF vegetation distracts a bit. Good focusing with good sharpness, very good first pose.

And welcome to BPN.

mortezanemati
05-23-2011, 11:36 AM
I can see your image (but there are some images that other can see but I couldn't)...

Very nice pose by the bird, love how it raise its tail up. Very nice details in the black, except at the bottom part of the bird that is in shadow, maybe fill flash will help with that or lower sun angle. I don't mind that one leg is block by the rock, but the OOF vegetation distracts a bit. Good focusing with good sharpness, very good first pose.

And welcome to BPN.

I ask you for advice and comment thank you.

Joe Brown
05-23-2011, 11:47 AM
Nice shot, great pose and very nice background. I am not fond of the OOF vegetation and would prefer if all of the back leg was visible but I do not think these issues ruin the image.

Very nice first post and welcome to the form.

Joe

John Chardine
05-24-2011, 07:31 PM
Great pose- didn't know blackbirds did this! I like the background and the composition although there is maybe a little too much "negative space" to the left. I would clone out some of the little white spots. You were fighting harsh light but you did well considering.