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bhavya joshi
05-16-2011, 10:03 AM
Well, same yellow rose but different experiment.. i try to take some pattern.. yes, it not sharp, Captured it without sharpness..
only some add light.. That it.. no more editing...
flash on.. With canon A495
F:4.5
ISO:8.0
what you think about cropping??..:S3:
http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/222975_217773784919352_100000601962672_821092_2719 274_n.jpg
Mitch Haimov
05-16-2011, 10:54 AM
Nice pattern, Joshi. Softness doesn't bother me, but I do have two recommendations:
The center seems to be "looking" right, so I think the composition would work better looser on the right and tighter on the left. You could also try a square crop.
There is some dirt or petal damage just to the left and above center--this would be easy to remove via cloning or quick mask techniques.
Keep exploring abstract compositions!
Roman Kurywczak
05-17-2011, 11:01 AM
Hey Joshi,
I do like Mitch's suggestions above. You do need to tone down the yellows a bit especially in the ULC . I did try an alternate crop...to help minimize the LH and RH side. I think thi shelps and also takes the main focus away from the center a bit more. Let me know what you think.
bhavya joshi
05-17-2011, 12:20 PM
Thanks roman for re-post. i was little confused about cropping you helped it .., thanks.
I gave little more light to flower .. but i think it was a bad idea.
I am expermenting on this image with tint, warminity.. etc.. what you all think about B/w in this image with more light and more shadow..??? look different??:w3
Andrew McLachlan
05-17-2011, 07:10 PM
Joshi, I like the soft focus on this one and the yellow is very nice. Roman's repost really works well with the crop and the toned down yellows. Nice work!
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