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Charles Glatzer
05-11-2011, 04:21 PM
Snowy Egret, St Aug, FL
Taken during a lesson illustrating manual flash use.
1D MIV, 500mm, Manual, f/5.6 @ 1/125, ISO 400, Manual flash w/o beamer
Post-production- CS5, NIK, Macbook Pro 15in
Appears as taken.
See you where there is light, or at the computer
Chas
Tom Rambaut
05-11-2011, 06:06 PM
Chas - I like the framing and the feather detail.I have not used flash myself but this looks spot on as It does not look like you have used flash. I like the slight opened beak.
Ofer Levy
05-11-2011, 06:08 PM
Beautiful! I am sure it is due to processing on a laptop but this can be brighter IMHO.
Arthur Morris
05-11-2011, 06:19 PM
Brightness looks spot on here. Like that you centered it so nicely against the o-o-f tree. Am not a fan of the ratty oak leaves; otherwise clean and pristine. How was your flash set?
Ofer Levy
05-11-2011, 07:00 PM
Here is how I think brightness should look.
Grace Scalzo
05-11-2011, 07:09 PM
One sweet image, Chas. Your lesson on flash was superb, can't wait to get out there and practice.
susanschermer
05-11-2011, 07:21 PM
Really beautiful, Chas. Hooray for the oof background. Alligator Farm can look pretty gritty. This looks like a painted portrait. I prefer the softer white of your pp.
Paul Randall
05-11-2011, 07:30 PM
Ofers repost looks spot on to me in terms of brightness. Agree with Arthur, BG is perfectly chosen and the foliage at top of frame detracts from the image just a tiny bit. Well done on the great use of flash :w3
Joe Senzatimore
05-11-2011, 08:30 PM
I prefer the original. I think it looks more natural. Now that I took your series , I hope to produce images as killer as this , with a bit of practice. You gave the tools. Now just need to get used to them.:S3::S3::S3:
Charles Glatzer
05-11-2011, 08:53 PM
Hey Gang,
The brightness is of course subjective. I mentioned "Appears as taken" for reference. Of course I could remove the oak leaves, but I am not a huge fan of this, preferring realism to sterility.
Best,
Chas
Harshad Barve
05-11-2011, 09:57 PM
Absolute rocking image , techs and pose spot on
TFS
Dumay de Boulle
05-11-2011, 11:59 PM
Lovely IQ and detail...Exp looks great with superb flash work...I prefer it a bit brighter but like you said 'its subjective'...Great stuff Chas:cheers:
Dave Courtenay
05-12-2011, 04:36 PM
Hats off to you for leaving the foliage in-lovely pastel colours and expert use of flash
Regards
Dave
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