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Dumay de Boulle
05-02-2011, 03:00 AM
Canon 1D MKIII
Canon 500 f4 L IS +1.4 Ext
AV f7.1
TV 1/2000
ISO 800
Evaluative Metering
AWB
RAW file processed in CS5 iMac

BG is OOF Red Cyanite rock, bush and trees. Cropped to what I think works for comp...Advice and crits as well as comments always appreciated:S3:

Stu Bowie
05-02-2011, 04:17 AM
I always like these angled diagonal flight postures, and good DOF. The spoonbill is separated nicely from the BG, and comp wise, I would probably add a bit more to the bottom.

Allen Sparks
05-02-2011, 07:28 AM
Nice diagonal and I like the overall comp. A little more eye contact would be nice but that is hard to get in an incoming shot like this.

Ofer Levy
05-02-2011, 07:52 AM
Sweet! Maybe a bit tight on the left.

arash_hazeghi
05-02-2011, 08:57 AM
sweet light and great pose!

Doug Brown
05-02-2011, 10:54 AM
Good sharpness. Not a bad idea to add a sliver of canvas on the left. I wouldn't mind a bit more of a profile view of the head. I'd consider darkening the bottom of the right half of the image.

Dumay de Boulle
05-02-2011, 01:24 PM
Thanks guys...I did forget to mention this is full frame except a crop from the top and bottom. I will look at adding a touch to the left

Grace Scalzo
05-02-2011, 02:35 PM
I really like this image as presented. If you were printing and matting it you could use a complimentary color on the mat and give the illusion of a bit more canvas. The colors of your background are so pleasing.

Kaustubh Deshpande
05-02-2011, 04:18 PM
Dumay, you nailed the techs. perfect DOF. loved the incoming angle.

Troy Lim
05-02-2011, 11:56 PM
Stunning shot.. Love it...love to see the repost with the suggestions made.

Dumay de Boulle
05-03-2011, 09:12 AM
Thanks for taking the time to view and crit folks!