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BenBotha
04-13-2011, 01:27 PM
100-400 L IS
ISO 400
F5.6
Morkel Erasmus
04-13-2011, 04:19 PM
gorgeous light here Ben...although overall it seems just a tad underexposed to my eye
I also think the composition would have been stronger if the lioness looking back was more to the RHS. I don't mind the shot looking over the OOF lying pride, but do you also have a smidge to add to the bottom?
BenBotha
04-14-2011, 04:18 AM
Thanks for the suggestions. I do have a little at the bottom. I am not happy with the sharpness-much better in CR5 before the post.
Ben
Ken Canning
04-14-2011, 05:53 AM
I enjoy the warm tones of the image. The subjects convey a sense of a lazy morning. Very nice. I agree with Morkel's comp suggestion.
Nancy Bell
04-14-2011, 10:51 AM
This is a different view of lions and really is the way they spend a good part of the day. I do like the perspective and also agree with Morkel's comp suggestion.
BenBotha
04-14-2011, 11:12 AM
Repost with more fore ground an more space to the right.
Morkel Erasmus
04-14-2011, 06:11 PM
Ben, do you sharpen after resizing? :S3:
repost looks better...I would still have a little less room on top :c3:
Robert Amoruso
04-14-2011, 08:19 PM
Ben, nice repost. As Morkel suggested some more of a crop from the top and I think cropping from the right and moving the lion to the right better balances the image.
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