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Cody Covey
04-11-2011, 10:50 AM
Background to much? I feel I am okay with it as it shows a bit of habitat. What do you guys think overall?

<table style="width: 596px; height: 80px;" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tbody><tr class="lookatme"><th>Exposure</th> <td>0.001 sec (1/1600)</td> </tr> <tr class="lookatme"> <th>Aperture</th> <td>f/4.0</td> </tr> <tr class="lookatme"> <th>Focal Length</th> <td>300 mm</td> </tr> <tr> <th>ISO Speed</th> <td>500</td> </tr> <tr> <th>Exposure Bias</th> <td>+1/3 EV</td></tr></tbody></table>

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William Malacarne
04-11-2011, 10:58 AM
BG is fine by me, you did a good job in showing this guys colors, open beak is a plus. He does seems to be going away from you a little bit.

Bill

Sid Garige
04-11-2011, 09:38 PM
Cody,

Techs are perfect. My be a tick harsh on whites but considering the light conditions you did an exceptional job.
Personally I prefer more attention to subjct with little bit of tighter crop some thing similar to this.
Wish he was flying parallel to sensor plane. I would have been an excellent image.

Cody Covey
04-12-2011, 01:35 AM
Little noisey so I ran some NR and cropped to how you mentioned, also took some off the back since I didn't have much room to work with in the front. Here is my redo of the image what do you guys think?
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Julie Kenward
04-16-2011, 08:30 AM
Cody, I don't usually mind a "habitat" image but there are a few things I think would make this even stronger. First, the bird is flying at an angle away from you - getting him parallel to the camera's sensor would make this stronger. Also, a busier BG works even better when it is evenly lit - when there are bright and dark spots they can tend to pull the viewer's eyes away from the focal point. If you can even out the dark area with a shadow/highlight adjustment you might be able to take this up another notch.

Good work on the bird...lots of good detail there - just need to watch those camera angles!