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Vinny La Scalza
03-23-2008, 06:56 PM
This was taken at Gatorland on Friday.
Mark IIN
f6.3
1/500
400mm f5.6
iso 400
Vinny La Scalza

Maxis Gamez
03-23-2008, 07:06 PM
Hi Vinny,

The whites are too hot in the back side of the Egret. I would like to see a little more room on top. The image also looks over-sharpened.

Keep them coming!

Arthur Morris
03-23-2008, 07:39 PM
Again, an excellent critique by Maxis. All are advised to check out "How White the Whites?" in the Eductational Resources Forum. You did find a good situation and that is a plus. The bird's head is turned slightly away and you need a bit more room at the top. Final verdict: lots of room for improvement.

later and love, artie

Robert O'Toole
03-23-2008, 08:40 PM
Beautiful Cattle Egret.

Agreed with the above comments.

Keep on improving and keep posting.

Robert

Mike Godwin
03-24-2008, 04:17 PM
Nice shot and composition, I like them tight in the frame personally. Very nice back lighting on the neck and crest, just a little hot on the back. Good job Vinny... keep 'em coming!

Mike Godwin
Gatorland