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AJ Witt
03-30-2011, 07:56 PM
Shot this two weeks ago. Just so happened to be in the Everglades for the "super moon".

This is a 12 shot pano shot with a 500mm f/4 lens.

Welcome any and all comments.

EXIF data: Nikon D700 w/Nikon 500 f/4 @ f11 @ 1/640 sec.

Dave Mills
03-31-2011, 09:56 AM
Hi AJ, The pano crop works here and technically you handled the stitch well. I would of preferred 2 things. First a bit more room at the bottom and secondly the moon shifted more to the right in the area above the opening in the trees. This would of taken the moon away from the edge.

Robert Amoruso
04-01-2011, 06:43 AM
Dave is right on with his suggestions on the moon's position. I like the blue sky, yellow moon and black trees - great contrasting of the colors.

The sky looks to have a lot of posterization. Is this evident in the original?

Morkel Erasmus
04-02-2011, 05:15 PM
can't say much more than what was mentioned above - agree with the suggestions
love the overall mood though!

Roman Kurywczak
04-12-2011, 07:54 PM
Hey AJ,
Very cool to see you took advantage! I agree on the moon position......I hope you got it a bit higher.....other than that.....this one wil shine with a few tweaks!