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bhavya joshi
03-23-2011, 01:29 PM
This was taken at my town.. It was a cloudy day with bright sun rays.. goose are roaming
beautiful evening..
Main Focus on Bright rays and clouds..:S3:
With Canon A495
F/4.5
ISO:80

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/200090_203656116331119_100000601962672_709063_8253 77_n.jpg

Mats Honkamaa
03-23-2011, 02:30 PM
Great light and reflection! I feel the photo is leaning a little bit though.

Dave Mills
03-24-2011, 08:59 AM
Hi Bhavya, I like the fact that you included a foreground but I would have offset the the sun a bit. Mats point regarding the image leaning is correct and I would give it some CCW rotation to even it out.
The color overall is a bit washed and I might have tried shooting this as an HDR or used a GND filter to bring out more color and to possibly tone down the sun a bit.

Robert Amoruso
03-25-2011, 05:10 PM
Good comments by Mats and Dave.

The foreground that you included is rather chaotic which distracts the viewer and detracts from the center of interested you stated, the clouds and sun.

Dave is correct that an extended range technique was needed to help you achieve your vision. I feel that concentrating on the clouds and placing the sun at a rule of thirds power point would have been the way to go here.

bhavya joshi
03-26-2011, 02:57 AM
Thank you, all.. For giving valuable advice..
I will try to captured the other shots as per says..