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Harshad Barve
02-09-2011, 12:45 AM
Dear all

Sunrise at Serengeti ,
D300, 70-200 at 180mm, f9 , ISO 400 , HH
All C & C are most welcome
Harshad

Chris Korman
02-09-2011, 12:51 AM
I like the orange colors and the misty mood, however I feel there is too much "room" on top, perhaps a wider aspect ratio cropping. Do you perhaps have another image that is more composed around the trees?

Nick Palmieri
02-09-2011, 09:22 AM
Hey Harshad, very nice feel to this image. Love the colors and love the mood. I agree that taking something off the top may strengthen this.

Dave Mills
02-09-2011, 09:28 AM
Hi Harshad, Nice overall feel to the image with the trees well spaced and no merges. Agree about too much room on top. This image would lend itself well to a pano. Would also have preferred the dominant tree on the far left have more room from the edge. Finally, there looks like a dust bunny near the 2nd tree in from the rt...

Morkel Erasmus
02-09-2011, 10:31 AM
can't add more than Dave's suggestions, but love the mood and the typical Serengeti scenery here...nice one!

Hilary Hann
02-09-2011, 06:47 PM
Very nice Harshad. Would agree to trying some pano crops and I think you need to check for dust bunnys or some light flare as there are a couple of spots between the trees which need attention.

Ed Cordes
02-09-2011, 09:33 PM
Love the colors. A pano with some sky cropped off - say to just above the top of the wispy clouds - would have more impact to me.

Don Lacy
02-09-2011, 10:45 PM
Hi Harshad, I agree with everyone else on cropping this even more into a pano

Roman Kurywczak
02-10-2011, 12:22 PM
Hey Harshad,
That light doesn't last long!!! I like the suggestions above so I hope you got a few different compositions as the colors and mood are fantastic.

Kaushik Balakumar
02-10-2011, 03:00 PM
Lovely colours Harshad. Nice selection of trees and the mist/dust on the ground adds a lot to the mood of the image.
Personally, I think that the amount of space on top is just fine.
You might want to clone out the sensor dust spots.

Andrew McLachlan
02-11-2011, 09:33 AM
Harshad, lovely colors and mood, agree with crop suggestions above.

Robert Amoruso
02-13-2011, 09:05 PM
Pano is a nice idea but I like the big sky look too.