View Full Version : Cypress Sunrise

Jared Lloyd
03-20-2008, 01:42 PM
This was taken along Tull Creek in North Eastern North Carolina.

Nikon D100, Tokina 28-80 2.8 ATX, f/13, 1/15, ISO 200

David Kennedy
03-20-2008, 03:29 PM
You've got a very strong foreground and subject and your handling of the image seems to be right on. I would have liked to have seen the sun somewhere other than the middle of the frame, as well as just a touch more separation between the tallest tree (on the left) and the top of the frame.

Roman Kurywczak
03-20-2008, 05:56 PM
Hey Jared,
Huge fan of this one! The sun placement isn't "ideal"/rule placement.............and maybe more saturation???????........as is; excellent composition and a super stong graphic element! Very well done...............all other nits to personal taste,
PS Nails in leaning post a plus IMO.

Alfred Forns
03-20-2008, 09:46 PM
Love those foreground elements Very strong !!! Agree with moving the sun from the middle of the image Also would use the levels mid slider to increase density !!!! Love it !!!

Robert Amoruso
03-21-2008, 06:58 AM
All the elements here for a very strong graphic composition. Centering of the sun mentioned.

Paul Marcellini
03-21-2008, 10:38 PM
This has a great atmosphere. I love the comp the way it is. If anything I think it might be stronger with an odd number of poles instead.

Roman Kurywczak
03-22-2008, 11:43 AM
Hey Jared,
I took another look at this one as I liked it so much and played with all the ideas. Not sure if I like all corrections or the original. Let me know what you think,

Ed Cordes
03-22-2008, 09:10 PM
I like the original, but wish it had a bit more head room.

Gus Cobos
04-07-2008, 07:06 PM
Jared, I like your original image, must agree with the sun placement...