repost: After the storm

[Hazel Grant]

I have worked on it, removing some clutter, finding out why it wasn't posting well, etc.
I also cropped as a way of "moving into" it, as suggested. Is this more what you all meant?

[Dave Mills]

Hi Hazel, a definate improvement over the original. The image is less cluttered and the sharpening problem is resolved. I see you removed the white object on the rt which enables the eye to more easily zero in on the opening.
If I was taking the image I might have moved more to the left so the concrete opening was positioned more to the rt in the frame.

[Roman Kurywczak]

Hey Hazel,
as I commented on the previous repost......this one seems to leave some of the story to me. I think the HDR would work here to open up the structure......and see if ofsetting the comp would help.

[Robert Amoruso]

Hazel,

Recrop much better. For me, having the cellar opening in a ROT power point is a good bet on strengthening the composition.