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Todd Frost
12-21-2010, 12:56 PM
Here is mom and youngster staying close together keeping watch for one of the boars in the area. Hyder, AK.
D300, 400 2.8, 1/200, f2.8, iso800, man exp.
Thanks for looking, comments and critiques appreciated.
Todd

Randy Stout
12-21-2010, 01:11 PM
Todd:

The look of concern really comes across on the cubs face!
I think the basic comp is effective because of the positioning of the bears.
Perhaps a sliver more space below.
On my monitor, the image looks just a bit flat, perhaps a smidge more contrast.

Cheers

Randy

DanWalters
12-21-2010, 03:49 PM
Nice interaction and I really like the look on the cubs face.

Hilary Hann
12-21-2010, 06:09 PM
Love the facial expressions and the way the two animals are standing together. Would agree with Randy's assessment regarding the flatness .

Robert Amoruso
12-21-2010, 06:16 PM
I would agree that a bit more room on the bottom would be nice. Not sure were you are at with such things but I would recommend cloning out the small sets of leaves protruding into the left side of the frame opposite the cubs head.

Todd Frost
12-21-2010, 07:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback, seems I have leaning towards a less contrasty image these days. Here is a repost with a bit more punch and removal of a few leaves for Robert :) See what you think.
Thanks again,
Todd

Hilary Hann
12-21-2010, 07:10 PM
The leaves didn't fuss me, but I think you have improved the image by making it a bit more punchy so I go with the 2nd post. BTW, taking out those leaves has made me look closer at that area of bear fur and I wonder if you've had to remove some other vegetation as some of the leaves seem to disappear into thin air. Just wondering.

Harshad Barve
12-22-2010, 04:27 AM
One lovely interaction captured here Todd , Looks like you have spent blast of time with these guys :)
Merry Christmas & Happy Holidays
TFS

Hendri Venter
12-22-2010, 04:53 AM
Your repost a def improvement Todd. Nicely done.

Marc Mol
12-22-2010, 06:46 AM
Repost is an improvement Todd, like the protective pose of mum and the concerned look on the cub, nicely done.
TFS

Stu Bowie
12-22-2010, 08:00 AM
Todd, I like your choice of comp, and the look back pose of the youngster puts this up a notch. Another vote for a little more room below, and well done on the repost.

Charles Glatzer
12-22-2010, 12:15 PM
Todd,

Comp works very well, and this is a fine image.

Best,

Chas

Steve Kaluski
12-22-2010, 01:10 PM
Hi Todd, for me it's a little of each posting. There is some nice detail in the cub and with a little more 'tweaking in PS I think you could be there. Work on the cub & the mother head IMHO. Agree on the little bit of gardening, has improved it. :)

Steve

Todd Frost
12-22-2010, 01:16 PM
Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.
Hilary: Leaves didn't bother me either, just removed a few as Robert had suggested to have a look.
Harshad: Happy holidays and Merry Christmas to you as well.

Todd