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Joel Eade
12-02-2010, 05:30 PM
A picture of a Titmouse actually in a crab apple tree but it's all I have close by!

denise ippolito
12-02-2010, 06:22 PM
Joel, I love the colors and the texture. Maybe a tiny bit tight on the bottom. I like your letters but I must admit I have no idea what they say. I'm wondering if a black border would make this more Asian feeling. Nice work.:)

Dan Brown
12-02-2010, 06:34 PM
Welcome to the party Joel! I agree with Denise re adding to the bottom. A black border would be nice too. I also would probably reduce the size of the calligraphy font and maybe move it to the right a little (although I really like the overall balance here!). No chop? I might also reduce the texture on the bird a bit.

Cheryl Slechta
12-02-2010, 07:05 PM
Joel, a beautiful composition with nice colors. I agree with Dan about reducing the texture on the bird.

Julie Kenward
12-02-2010, 07:24 PM
I'm also with the others - too tight at the bottom and the bird needs to come through just a bit more. I love the composition and layout though...very nice balance...very zenful and yet cheery.

Joel Eade
12-02-2010, 07:41 PM
Thanks for the suggestions...is this more like it?

denise ippolito
12-02-2010, 08:10 PM
Looks better!:)

Dan Brown
12-02-2010, 08:32 PM
Thanks for the suggestions...is this more like it?Much improved Joel!

Steve Meadows
12-02-2010, 09:54 PM
Joel----Awesome image--I can see it in a nice frame hanging in my house!

Anita Bower
12-03-2010, 06:29 AM
Lovely! The colors are most pleasing, as is the composition. The second post is just right.

Indranil Sircar
12-03-2010, 02:07 PM
Beautiful composition. I like the color and the effect. Excellent repost.

Andrew McLachlan
12-03-2010, 03:35 PM
Hi Joel, love the repost!

Patti Edens
12-04-2010, 10:02 AM
Sweet image! I loved the original, but the repost is even better. The colors are wonderful and I love the balance of the bird and the berries.