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thijs broekkamp
11-02-2010, 10:33 AM
Canon 30d with canon 10-22mm
Tripod
wired remote
nd filter

iso 100
8 secondes
f25
http://i957.photobucket.com/albums/ae54/thijsbroekkamp/_MG_5593bwrktsrgbFull.jpg

Roman Kurywczak
11-02-2010, 02:16 PM
Hey Thijs,
I like what you did here comp wise....balancing the rocks and using the long SS to make the water silky. The image appears a bit flat overall so I wonder if adding a bit of contrast or tweaking the water and sky seperately will bring this to its full potential. Just a few thoughts to ponder but let's see what others chime in.

Morkel Erasmus
11-03-2010, 02:52 AM
I agree with Roman's critique here and wish there was some more drama in the sky...some nice textures up front

Robert Amoruso
11-03-2010, 09:15 AM
I am good with just a graduation of color in the sky for these types of images. I agree with Roman that contrast and tonal separation needs additional work.

Well done on the composition as Roman mentioned.

Dave Mills
11-03-2010, 09:38 AM
Hi Thijs, Good suggestions by Roman and agree on liking the way the comp is framed but as stated the image needs more depth. The soft water flow due to the long SS is appealing along with a low shooting angle...