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Pieter de Waal
10-20-2010, 03:38 PM
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Another image from my recent trip to Kgalagadi Transfrontier Park. Taken from vehicle , beanbag.This little guy kept flitting ahead of the vehicle and move just as I was ready, eventually stopped long enough for a few shots. Fullframe added canvas on right and bottom blurred BG
50D/EF500f4+1.4/f5.6@1/250/ISO400
Jim Fenton
10-20-2010, 04:24 PM
Cool looking subject and it presents well as a vertical.
DOF looks perfect to me.
I wish the bird were looking up at just a bit less of an angle (I'm being picky).
I think that if you used the burn tool or a QM on the lighter colored background area to the right of the subjects head, it would be less distracting.
John Guastella
10-20-2010, 04:36 PM
Beautiful bird, Pieter, with spectacular colors. Image is nice and sharp, but you could have stopped down to f/6.3 or f/7.1 to get the tail in focus. Exposure is good, but I think the bird's head could be lightened a bit.
The entire upper part of the BG is distracting to me - there are some artifacts, particularly in the URC. As Jim suggests, some work on this area would improve the image.
John
Sidharth Kodikal
10-20-2010, 05:24 PM
Beautiful. Gorgeous bird and superbly sharp image. Great colors.
If anything, I wish the end of the perch wasn't freshly cut. I would also consider cloning out that bit of branch that's forking downwards.
I also find it slightly tight above and below, but do absolutely love it as is.
Jim Crosswell
10-20-2010, 06:12 PM
I love seeing images of these birds and this one is a beauty! I like the sharpness, detail and colour.
Arthur Morris
10-20-2010, 10:45 PM
Exquisite bird, colors, image design, and BKGR. It could use a bit more space all around. The broken ends of the perch were bad luck. Be right back.
Arthur Morris
10-20-2010, 10:48 PM
It took a bit of effort but the results were well worth it (to me) as the bird and the image are so, so beautiful. Removed a few nubs from the perch and then reworked the end of the perch. It looked to phony so I went back and grabbed the "end" of the perch from the original, rotated and enlarged it, and tidied it up a bit. I am quite proud of my efforts :)
Arthur Morris
10-20-2010, 10:51 PM
ps; Most of the work done with the Clone Stamp Tool and a series of Quick Masks as described in Digital Basics and APTATs I.
Dumay de Boulle
10-21-2010, 12:07 AM
Very nice..Good detail and BG...The natural colors are superb
Stu Bowie
10-21-2010, 09:25 AM
Pieter, super comp and pose, and you have exposed the colours very well. I like what Artie did to the end of the perch.
Ken Watkins
10-21-2010, 10:11 AM
One of natures best marvels, I thought the BG on the original a little dark.
Artie, Very clever work on the repost, both the bird and pose make it very worthwhile;)
Arthur Morris
10-21-2010, 11:31 AM
Thanks Ken. No good for most contests but very good for wall hanging and for sales :)
Pieter de Waal
10-21-2010, 02:36 PM
Thanks all for your kind comments and suggestions.
I was'nt happy with the oof broken end of the perch but was in two minds wether to fix it. Arthur you made up my mind , great job on a tricky bit of cloning thanks. I now need to try it as well. Will also do some work on the background which was a sand dune with shadows. I suppose when shooting in the wild without setup and with birds not behaving a little leeway in processing is alllowed.
John G. thanks for your suggestion I agree. The bird kept sitting in the shade so it was a compromise between shutterspeed and aperture and the bird only gave me a few shots.
Arthur Morris
10-21-2010, 07:29 PM
YAW sir. Very little cloning and lots of Quick Masking :) And I agree that some BKGR work would be advised. Try using the Clone Stamp Tool at about 40%.
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