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Gary Hamilton
10-18-2010, 06:03 PM
Canon 7D
Canon 300mm f 2.8
1/250
f 5.6
200 ISO

cropped about 30%

Alan Murphy
10-18-2010, 06:09 PM
Nice eye contact, which helps with the steep angle. It could go a little brighter IMO.

Gary Hamilton
10-18-2010, 06:39 PM
How does this version look?

Daniel Cadieux
10-18-2010, 06:49 PM
The lightened version looks better IMO. I'd add back some room bottom, top, and right...the bottom toe is nearly clipped by the edge. My guess is that you cloned out some foliage, but there are remnants on the tail and wing tips.

P.S. Perfect head turn!

Arthur Morris
10-18-2010, 07:23 PM
You are not permitted to clip the toes :) You gotta give them a border.... Vertical here would have worked well..... Lighter is better and the image is sharp.

Gary Hamilton
10-18-2010, 07:24 PM
The foliage gaffe was so bad it actually knocked out my internet connection. Now that I'm back, it's time to go back to the drawing board. I should have stuck to my minimal gardening rule.