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Jaime Johnson
10-16-2010, 08:22 PM
Canon 5D Mark II / Canon 180mm L
http://jaimejohnson.zenfolio.com/img/s9/v14/p972112845-4.jpg

Ken Childs
10-17-2010, 12:20 PM
Hi Jaime, please give us more details about this shot. There are posting guidelines listed in a sticky at the top of this forum. We don't need every single detail listed in that sticky but the more informatin we have, the better the critiques can be. :)

Jay Sheinfield
10-17-2010, 06:02 PM
Jamie,

Great timing.............and done in the wild rather than the lab. ;) To better focus on the water umbrella, I would crop it down to only the rocks under water, just leaving some breathing room around the spray. Then I would darken the BG colors to further pop the umbrella. Just some thoughts to consider to get even more out this image.

Roman Kurywczak
10-19-2010, 09:52 AM
Hey Jaime,
Tough to give a good critique w/o the rest of the specs......I do think you can play around with the center of the collision to get it to seperate from the BG a touch more. Will revisit this when you provide the extra info as I really like the concept!