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Donna Lorello
03-11-2008, 07:19 PM
This killdeer was taken last year - the bird was super close - just within yards of my car window as it was running around the high school parking lot in my home town. I think it might be overly bright an image but I'll be anxious to hear critiques as usual.
Alfred Forns
03-11-2008, 07:25 PM
Hi Donna I can confirm the brightness !!!!!!
You normally want more room from the beak to the front edge than from the tail to the other end On the bottom would crop a little You did get the bird in a good pose and also did well with the harsh light !!!
Did a few changes
Gus Cobos
03-12-2008, 09:20 AM
Hi Donna,
I like your little fellow, good exposure. The correction that Al made is dead on; you want to place your subject on one of the quadrents in your frame. (rule of 1/3) and maybe a tad more of color hue. In all, I LOVE IT... CONGRATS...:D
Gus Cobos...:cool:
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