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Keith Rawlins
03-11-2008, 12:28 AM
Big dam in the kruger park
Camera Canon 1dsmII
Lens Canon 24-105 is usm
FL 47mm
Speed 1/250
App F/9.0
Flash Off
Iso 400

Alfred Forns
03-11-2008, 01:07 AM
Hi keith 1!!

Love those strong colors and silhouetted trees !!!! I like the slight separation in the middle ground land to left form bg Might suggest taking a little from the bottom Would like seeing the shore line a little lower

The one tree in the middle is sort of on the way Not sure what to do with it Also if you had the camera on a tripod would have tried going for more dof Would like to see the trees sharp !!!! Overall one fine image that I would be proud to have !!!

Robert Amoruso
03-11-2008, 03:01 PM
I would agree with Alfred's comments and suggestions on this one Keith. I would add that the tree on the right has branches touching the edge. If possible, generally best not to have elements of the composition intersecting the edges. Nice work with the color in this one.

Harold Davis
03-11-2008, 06:27 PM
beautiful colors, keith. nice work. nothing i can say more than robert and al.

gary rouleau
03-11-2008, 07:20 PM
Pretty shot Keith, well done. Nits same as above.

Keith Rawlins
03-14-2008, 08:32 AM
Thanks guys for comments and suggestions