View Full Version : Song Sparrow
Mikko Viljamaa
09-19-2010, 05:02 PM
OK lets try something different this time. I tried to recompose this bird. Did I leave too much room now to right? Would overall tighter crop work better?
As usually all other comments are highly appreciated.
Canon MK3 + 500/4 + 1.4
AE 5.6 / 2000
+2/3
ISO 200
Camera on Tripod
Cheers,
Mikko
Lance Peters
09-19-2010, 09:43 PM
Hi Mikko - like the singing pose and the catchlight in the eye - Would have wished for more even lighting on the subject, front of the bird is in shadow.
For my personal tastes I think there is a little too much negative space on the right - could just be me though.
I would try and get the sun at your back before you start and then look for opportunities.
Keep em coming :)
Julie Brown
09-20-2010, 10:23 AM
Hi Mikko,
I like the catchlight and the pose. I agree with Lance about too much negative space. Good advice regarding the shadow and direction of light.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 4.2.2 Copyright © 2024 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved.