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Dave Mills
09-12-2010, 02:10 PM
Shot this at a place called the Wave in Arizona a number of years back as a slide.(one of my last trips using film) Curious to know how others feel about the comp...

Robert Amoruso
09-13-2010, 06:34 AM
I like the strong vertical lines and detail defining shadows. Only thing I would change if I could would have been having the vertical the full length of the frame and not have those opposing rock in the upper left.

Roman Kurywczak
09-13-2010, 02:21 PM
Hey Dave,
Agree with Robert that this would be stronger w/o the UL contrast......but this is still very strong with the lines and light!

Garry Gibson
09-16-2010, 08:58 AM
Dave I agree with above comments. The colors and lines are dramatic and obviously the dried branch is a great focal point.
However, when I see the opposing rocks at the bottom it confuses my eye and makes me wonder if I am looking directly down
the hill and that little bit of sand is the bottom.

Jeffrey Sipress
09-25-2010, 07:26 PM
Nice comp and image, Dave. I wish you had overcast light. Sandstone glows in indirect or diffused light. A BW version may be interesting.