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Kaushik Balakumar
07-20-2010, 05:42 PM
Just a water abstract.

Nikon D90, 18-105mm VR, tripod.
f/16, 2s, ISO200

Critiques welcome...

Dave Mills
07-21-2010, 05:04 PM
Hi, I like the colored water and the soft flow of reflected light. IMO the image would be stronger with the rock positioned more to the right with the water flowing past it. I also think the break in the water above the rock is a bit distracting and is pulling my eye to this area....

Nick Palmieri
07-21-2010, 06:46 PM
Very nice effect on the water. I agree with Dave and think placing the rock in one of the lower 1/3 corners with strengthen it. the composition.

Roman Kurywczak
07-21-2010, 07:09 PM
Hey Kaushik,
I'm OK with the rock placement and color....but do agree that the top wave takes away from the overall image appeal and cropping doesn't work in this case as it pluts the rock too close to the top......only way I can see doing it in the field is going a bit higher to get the rock lower and eliminate the ripple....just a thought for next time out.