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AlvanBuckley
07-18-2010, 07:41 PM
Shot near downtown Toronto this past May!
Cloudy conditions so it's a pretty bland looking shot (mostly drab looking colours). Nevertheless, I like how you can see the foot and the pebbles/rocks look nice, imo.

ISO 200
0 ev
f/5.6
SS 1/500
Nikon D300s + VR 80-400 @ 400mm

C&C would be appreciated!
thanks in advance :)
-Alvan Buckley

Charissa
07-19-2010, 02:57 AM
Simple and effective comp. Like the foot and pebbles, as is. Head area could be a bit sharper, seems soft just below the eye. Nice detail Alvan.:)

Nico Steenberg
07-19-2010, 02:54 PM
Nice low angle and i like the foot up pose ! Comp works well. Will RUN another round of sharpening ? Well done !

Randy Stout
07-19-2010, 06:54 PM
Alvan:

I like the pose and placement in frame. Might consider a very small crop down from top.

If you want to tweak the brightness, might I suggest adjusting the white point a bit to brighten the image ( pull the right hand slider in a bit in curves, watching for any blown highlight warnings). You can then lift the middle of the curve just a bit to brighten it.
I tried this, and felt it opened the image up, removed a slight sense of murkiness, without changing the overall balance.

Just an option.

Cheers

Randy

Aidan Briggs
07-19-2010, 07:05 PM
Nice pose with the foot up. Good low angle too. Some fill flash would help for cloudy days.