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subhrashis
06-17-2010, 11:52 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4064/4711115224_1158a5152e_b.jpg

Taken at okhrey, sikkim.

1/400 @f/6.3, Iso 400, 200mm D5000

Robert Amoruso
06-19-2010, 09:53 AM
Nice division of the mist and the green mountain side. I like the placement of the few houses in the lower right.

I hope that you also reframed those houses into a more rule of thirds like placement in an image, but if not I think my preference is for how they are here.

I suggest desaturating the green some.

Dave Mills
06-19-2010, 10:03 AM
Hi, Interesting image witgh the fog creeping up the mountain. The image seems to be divided in half. I might go for more green and less mist which would give you more room to bring the houses over to the right and up a bit.
They do have interest and pull the eye to that area.

subhrashis
06-19-2010, 10:04 AM
Actually the mingling mists and trees were what i was trying to show.... the houses were left in the frame only for some sort of scale.

I'll try desaturating the greens.. but this was just after some heavy showers, so nature really is at her greenest here!

subhrashis
06-19-2010, 10:15 AM
Yes, the division in half is a problem, i can crop and see, but the houses were at the frame edge....

Will it be better to crop them out?

Roman Kurywczak
06-19-2010, 02:41 PM
Hi subhrashis,
For my tastes it would be better to crop the houses out and perhaps clone in/patch the dark area of the URC. Another option would be to crop proportionally on the right with the crop on the bottom.....this would keep the ratio and accomplishh the same thing. The greens do appear a bit contrasty/saturated... so I would try binging out some more depth there and even in the fog.....any bit you more will detail you get there will only enhance the mood.