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Cory Bucher
06-09-2010, 07:25 PM
Taken a couple days ago

Nikon D300s, Sigma 80-400mm F4.5/5.6 OS Lens
ISO 800, SS 1/1000, F5.6
Manual Mode, Handheld

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4050/4686870316_27e36c66f9_b.jpg

Fabs Forns
06-09-2010, 07:55 PM
Very nice feather display with lots to see in the plumage. I like the eye contact and EXP control, a bit tight in the frame.

Dave Mills
06-09-2010, 10:46 PM
Hi Cory, I also like the detail,HA,muted backround and even lighting. I agree the image is too tight in the frame...

Lance Peters
06-10-2010, 01:06 AM
Hi Corey - techs look solid and not bad for ISO 800 from the d300s!!
Agree that its a little tight in the frame - otherwise looking good.

Keep them coming and dont forget to comment on other peoples images.

Alfred Forns
06-10-2010, 05:01 AM
Agree on above comments, can add I would lighten the left side of the face a bit more, tone down the greens ( a little) and do give it more room as suggested !!!

Remember to leave a few comments when you post, only fair to others and will be a great learning tool for you !!! Thanks !!

Cory Bucher
06-10-2010, 09:52 AM
Thank you all for your suggestions and kind words. here is what I have come up with, hopefully it will look better.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4012/4687699725_3628fb5c1f_b.jpg

Dave Leroy
06-10-2010, 11:18 AM
Extra room on the repost looks good.

I like the pose and composition.
You may want to try a bit of additional sharpening on the bird. It looks like it may handle it.

Nicely done.

Cory Bucher
06-11-2010, 12:29 AM
Thanks again everyone for the comments. Will try and respond to more posts.