View Full Version : Misty taste of Moonshine ;)

Bibhav Behera
05-29-2010, 12:47 PM
Although Moonshine is a kind of Alcohol and the lines are from a John Denver song, I thought the title might be apt here.

Canon EOS 1000D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm @18mm (Canon Remote Trigger used )
SS 19 seconds
ISO 100

Comments and critiques welcome...

Roman Kurywczak
05-29-2010, 02:10 PM
Hi Bibhav,
I like the colors and mood here but wish the top of the RH tree was entirely in the frame. The clouds have a nice fell and look to them due to the long SS. Glad to see it didn't blur the moon. and while it isn't in the trees repositioning to get it a touch further away may have been preferable. Nicely thought out and handled pretty well.

Harold Davis
05-29-2010, 03:20 PM
the cloud blurs are awesome and the moon looks great. i just wished the moon wasnt so centered in the frame. i really like that the tree is angled and agree with roman. i think just moving around to repostion the moon would have made it stronger.

Dave Mills
05-29-2010, 04:40 PM
Hi Bibhav, Agree with above comments but thought I would give you another idea.

Bibhav Behera
05-30-2010, 12:16 AM
Thanks for the comments guys.
I like your idea Dave. Will try it out.

Don Lacy
05-30-2010, 06:02 PM
Hi Bibhav, Nicely conceived and executed, I think Dave's crop eliminates some unneeded space and strengthens your concept.

thijs broekkamp
05-31-2010, 02:11 AM
Very nice atmosphere, a bit too much darkness on the left i think.