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wendell westfall
05-28-2010, 03:46 PM
D90 70-200VR@200 1/2500 f5.6 ISO640 0EV monopod

Where there are baby avocets and stilts there are parents, too. Last week I found this Mr/Mrs Stilt whom I thought looked pretty good. I believe the object of his/her gaze might have been his/her shadow, since the sun was shining slightly right to left. How'd I do?

Wendell

stuart wanuck
05-28-2010, 07:49 PM
good job uncomfortable with the branches in the background and blue discoloration in on left,nice image can clone the above out

Axel Hildebrandt
05-29-2010, 04:17 PM
I like the pose and calm water. It looks as if it needs a bit CW rotation and I would try to get more details in the blacks and tone down the whites some. I'm undecided about the grass in the upper left.

wendell westfall
05-30-2010, 12:47 PM
Axel, thanks. Please tell me how technically (I use LR2 and Elements) you would "tone down the whites some" . . . and how you can tell they need it . . .