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Myer Bornstein
05-19-2010, 11:42 AM
Warblers have been very active. this one came to look at me phishing. Nikon D300s Sigma 150-500
PS adjusted
500mm
750mm (in 35mm film)
1/800 sec, f/8
Mode: Manual
Metering: Multi-segment
Exp comp: +1
ISO: 800
White balance: Auto

Colin Knight
05-19-2010, 12:31 PM
Myer, I love the perch here, the only downside is the leaf covering the bird's foot. The pose and eye contact also work very well!

I am wondering about the processing though. The images looks underexposed. The background is noisy. And all of the image looks over sharpened with some artifacts. You may want to consider starting back at the original file and running NR. Then selectively sharpen the bird and leave the background alone. I would also crop a little tighter in portrait orientation to eliminate the dead space on the sides, but keeping the bird to the left.

Myer Bornstein
05-19-2010, 01:10 PM
Colin
Here is my re-post. Is it better?

Colin Knight
05-19-2010, 01:36 PM
The crop is a bit tight. Other than that, huge improvement in my opinion- especially in the noise department! Maybe still a bit dark. Perhaps some others can chime in too!

David Thomasson
05-19-2010, 04:42 PM
If you mask the bird, perch, and leaves, you can then brighten those elements and leave the background dark to set the subject off a little more dramatically. Nice image!

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/2418/yellow2gs.jpg

Alfred Forns
05-19-2010, 05:41 PM
Sweet re-post David !!! Excellent suggestion by Colin and the end result one fine keeper !!!

... remember the histogram in camera, any under exposure will be translated to noise later !!! Love this image !!

Myer Bornstein
05-19-2010, 06:23 PM
Thanks all

Jim Fenton
05-19-2010, 07:14 PM
I kinda liked the original crop :)

The re_posts sure are an improvement, but I'm wondering Myer...was it heavily overcast / low light when you created this? +1 EV should have been more than enough to light this properly and in fact, I would have expected the yellows ro have been over exposed unless it were really gloomy out.

Myer Bornstein
05-19-2010, 07:21 PM
Jim
it was cloudy, mostly dull with an occasional strech of lighter sky. taken on Tuesday

Arthur Morris
05-19-2010, 08:05 PM
Agree on liking the original post for COMP and on the +1 not making sense for Nikon.... Perhaps Myer darkened the image during conversion.... Killer repost by David. Killer.