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Ricardo Rodriguez
05-15-2010, 01:03 PM
Got this image this past February at Anhinga Trail; the bird was 6 ft from me.
Nikon D700, 70-200 f/2.8 + 1.4TC (280mm), Flash with BB
1/30 f/5 ISO 400

Lance Peters
05-15-2010, 02:30 PM
Hi Ricardo - sharp as a tack were it needs to be - nice detail in the eye - might just tone down the highlights on the bill from the flash a little. Might darken the plumage a bit also.
Composition doesn't quite work for me - a little more on the RHS for my personal tastes.
TFS

Mark Young
05-15-2010, 03:52 PM
Lovely coloured bg. The sharpness and detail looks great, especially the eye. Agree with Lance about the composition needing a bit more on the right.

Ricardo Rodriguez
05-15-2010, 10:09 PM
Thanks Lance and Mark, I do have lots more on the RHS that I cropped so the eye would fall on a ROT point. I'm afraid I'm a sucker for the ROT, but I do See your point, so I'll repost with more of the body soon (am on iPad just now... Love it!!!)

Ricardo Rodriguez
05-16-2010, 03:44 AM
Hello again Lance and Mark, here is the promised repost without the crop;. I also toned down the effect of the flash on the beak and darkened the body a bit, as per Lance's suggestion. Please let me know if this version is more agreeable than the OP.

Once more, thanks for your comments.

Lance Peters
05-16-2010, 03:26 PM
Repost is better - would be tempted to crop some from the top to move it closer to a ROT horizontally.
Plumage looks better that bit darker.
:)

Ricardo Rodriguez
05-16-2010, 04:29 PM
Thanks, Lance. I see what you mean about cropping some from the top, but I like the light blue sky so it will stay.

Your comments are helping me a lot!