Tree Swallow

[John Goldman]

Canon 50D, 1/500, f8, ISO400, 300mm+2xTC
Crop for composition, NR, increased saturation and sharpen a little.

[Desmond Chan]

The white looks a little bit over. I think you could crop this tighter...I don't think for this one you need to show so much of the perch.

[Lance Peters]

Hi John - you have captured the colours and the sheen quite nicely - whites do look a little hot - agree with desmond would crop tighter removing the lower branch entirely - does not add anything to the picture and will put the focus onto your subject.
Good HA and eye contact and like the over the shoulder look.
Good show :)

[Alfred Forns]

Hi John Agree on all points Biggest change would be the branch, big branches can overpower the little guys !!!

[Dave Mills]

Hi John, All good points made above. The backround is great but agree on cropping to make the bird more dominant...

[John Goldman]

Repost. Well?