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Jason G. Harrison
05-01-2010, 04:52 PM
I like this image better than my previous offering of this species.

D300s, 600VR, 1.4tc, ISO 400, f/9, 1/800th SS

http://www.jasongharrison.com/images/7758_S.jpg

Hope you enjoyed. As always, C&C welcomed and encouraged.

Jason

Arthur Morris
05-01-2010, 06:22 PM
I did not see the other one. :) Head angle, sharpness, and perch are all good but the scrunched up, angled to the left, no right foot showing, over the shoulder pose leaves me lacking.

Colin Knight
05-01-2010, 08:11 PM
I love this one. The right foot would be a great addition, but still a wonderful image. Thanks for sharing!

Ilija Dukovski
05-01-2010, 09:18 PM
I like this species very much since it is not an 'usual' here in Mass.
The image is very nice, just a bit of HA and eye contact would make it even better.
'Over-the-shoulder' pose is tough, not bad but difficult :)
I think fill-flash would help with the shadow too.

Cheers, ID

Juan Aragonés
05-02-2010, 03:13 AM
ooops, the image doesn´t load :confused:

Harshad Barve
05-02-2010, 07:16 AM
I liked this one , beautiful image
TFS

Danny Laredo
05-02-2010, 10:19 AM
Lovely Bg and pose, I do not mind the over the shoulder pose.
I do find the bird a touch big IMO.