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thijs broekkamp
04-29-2010, 06:18 AM
Today i was finally lucky with the birds. I managed to approach this lovely bird into a few meters. I'm looking forward to hear your critiques. Canon eos 30d with canon 300mm f4 with 1,4 converter.

http://i957.photobucket.com/albums/ae54/thijsbroekkamp/_MG_0264bwrktsrgb.jpg

Randy Stout
04-29-2010, 07:09 AM
Thijs:

Soft light, excellent head position for look back pose, soft and muted background.
I might consider a bit more sharpening on the head/eye area, as the wings looks just a bit sharper to me.
I would try a 25% crop of the free space above, and perhaps just a bit from the right (into the gap between the plants). Just an option to see what you think of it.

Cheers

Randy

Grace Scalzo
04-29-2010, 07:10 AM
Thijs, I think that this is beautiful. I like the colors and the view of the bird's back. Very nicely composed as well.

Jonathan Ashton
04-30-2010, 01:52 AM
A pleasing image with good colours, I agree with Randy's comments regarding cropping and a little extra sharpening.