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Bob Miller
04-26-2010, 06:46 PM
Shot in my garden: tripod
1/20 sec at f8
ISO 1000
35-70mm lense at 35mm
Nikon D-200
All comments welcome!

Desmond Chan
04-26-2010, 09:12 PM
I like the composition and the feel of it. Not sure if I would sharpen it a little bit more. Still looks good as is !

OvidiuCavasdan
04-27-2010, 02:50 AM
I like how you composed this one, colors are very nice. You might try one tilted a bit to the left?

Anita Bower
04-27-2010, 05:08 AM
The composition drew me right in--well done. The dark green bg works beautifully to showcase the flower, stem and leaf. I wish flower and leaf were just a bit sharper. I would clone out the two little hair-like things on the stem where the flower and leaf branch off--but not a bit deal, but because they are light in color they draw my attention. I really like the simplicity and graphics of this image.

Stuart Frohm
04-27-2010, 06:42 AM
This is elegant and delightful.

Ken Childs
04-27-2010, 07:58 AM
Very nice comp on this one. The colors are great too. The right side of the BG is showing some texture that's missing on the left. I think it would look better if the BG was more even, either a solid color or all textured. Ovidiu's suggestion of rotating it slightly so the flower is pointing more towards the corner might be worth looking into.

Roman Kurywczak
04-27-2010, 07:35 PM
Hi Bob,
Very good suggestions offered above. I think blurring BG and perhaps rotating would also be my first 2 suggestions.....but you may also explorer a CCW rotation for comparison. One of my favorite flowers.

Julie Kenward
04-27-2010, 07:53 PM
One of my favorites, too. I also see a difference between the two sides of the BG and would recommend doing a surface blur to try to even those out a bit more. Lovely composition, Bob. Great way to fill the frame! ;)

Christopher Miller
04-27-2010, 08:43 PM
Very nice, Bob! Love the colors and BG and beautiful composition. Agree on evening out the BG.