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Giovanni Frescura
04-15-2010, 05:04 PM
Canon Mark III
Canon 100/400
iso 400
f.8
1/1000
For me it is tranquillity...
Tip for composition or pp?
Randy Stout
04-16-2010, 06:57 AM
Giova:
Nice exposure on the whites. Great wing position on the lower, middle bird. Do wish there was a bit more separation of the other two about to land from the reeds in the BG. I do find my eye being pulled from the birds by all the detail in the BG. Might consider slight blurring of dark background.
Cheers
Randy
Myer Bornstein
04-16-2010, 07:17 AM
I would crop out eveything above the brown in the BG. To me it would make the picture stronger
Randy Stout
04-16-2010, 07:20 AM
Myer:
Interesting observation, and I would agree if it weren't for the two birds up into that area (dark background).
I certainly think your idea is a valid option if Giova doesn't mind losing those two birds.
Randy
Myer Bornstein
04-16-2010, 07:26 AM
Randy
If the BG birds were in focus then I agree, but to me they are a distraction
Giovanni Frescura
04-16-2010, 09:01 AM
Thanks to all
I will ty and I put the both option now. Don't see now the detail (they are a crop only of the web's picture) ..but only for composition.
The original shoot is larger so I could put more snown upper if it could better...
Giovanni Frescura
04-16-2010, 09:02 AM
second option...
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