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peter delaney
04-05-2010, 12:17 PM
A different perspective of a previous post..

nikon d3 50mm iso 200 f8 1/320 hand held

Roman Kurywczak
04-05-2010, 01:07 PM
Hey Peter,
I like this perspective as it really shows off the dune line very nicely.It does appear that the whites in the distant mountains are a bit too detailess on my monitor and that draws my eye a bit too much from the lovely textures of the FG one. A bit of tweaking and this one will also be another beauty!

Dave Mills
04-05-2010, 03:11 PM
Hi Peter, Great leading line with nice detail until you get to the rear mountains as Roman pointed out. The dark clouds in the backround add to the drama...Good comp!

Bob Miller
04-05-2010, 07:23 PM
Hey pete...Lovely image....Hope you can tone down the hills in the bg but beautiful!

Kobus Tollig
04-06-2010, 01:42 AM
Ditto Roman on this. Still great shot well done

Robert Amoruso
04-06-2010, 06:04 AM
Peter,

Agree with the others, the strong leading line of the dune and the clouds are good but the loss of details in the BG needs to be addressed if possible.

peter delaney
04-12-2010, 03:38 PM
A big thanks to you all for all your help with my landscape, you have no idea how much it helps.. I agree about the lack of details in BKG hills ,will sort it out...

thanks again,

Peter