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Harshad Barve
03-23-2010, 08:42 AM
Dear all

D300 , 600mm, f4, ISO 400 , beanbag, cropped but original Vert
All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
Harshad

Todd Frost
03-23-2010, 10:01 AM
I like the chosen comp, gives a sense of where he has come from. Nice and sharp on the jackal with blurred fg and bg. Good eye contact as well. Tongue an and added bonus. TFS
Todd

Robert Amoruso
03-23-2010, 10:25 AM
Great expression and tongue.

I am wondering if some off the top might be appropriate. I probably would have done that if it were mine.

Steve Maxson
03-23-2010, 11:02 AM
I like the interesting facial expression - the look of the eyes and the tongue. I would also suggest a crop from the top to place more emphasis on the jackal. The overall lightness of that part of the frame tends to draw my eye.

Steve Kaluski
03-23-2010, 11:36 AM
Hi Harshad, something different hey, good.:)

I do feel though the 'blacks' are quite dominant, so whether there is too much contrast I'm not sure? Also is the tongue that reddish pink? it's all a bit to strong for me, however, will bow to your judgement Harshad, your call on this. ;)

Steve

Steve

Austin Thomas
03-23-2010, 01:22 PM
Very nice Harshad,

I like the expression and the tongue is the extra element for me. It does appear a little contrasty here and I would crop tighter from the top.

tfs

Austin

Hendri Venter
03-23-2010, 02:56 PM
One very fine image Harshad. I like the one foot up and the tongue out. Well captured.

Morkel Erasmus
03-23-2010, 05:13 PM
looks like the village idiot :) funny expression and lovely DOF Harshad...

Steve Canuel
03-23-2010, 06:51 PM
Agree with Steve K. and Austin on the blacks/contrast. Tongue color does stand out, and if natural, I'd tone it down a tiny bit as that's what captures attention right away rather than the cool looking eyes. I like the little cloud of dust he seems to be kicking up as he moves on his way.

Stu Bowie
03-24-2010, 12:12 AM
Harshadbhai, I like the raised paw showing movement, and the protruding tongue adds interest. He looks like he's been on a long hike.