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MIHAIL OBADA
03-21-2010, 02:32 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii109/mihailo_2008/_MG_0037.jpg (http://www.dictionarenglezroman.ro/dictionar/remainder)


350D, canon 70-200/4 @ 70mm, iso100, ss 1/320, f:8, ACR&PS


All critics and comments welcome! Thanks!

Roman Kurywczak
03-21-2010, 09:14 PM
Hi Mihal,
I think the 2 out of focus stems that are intertwined are hurting this. While I am OK with the DOF falloff.....the 2 almost merging seed heads and clipped stem are too distracting. Was there any possible way to get seperation in them?

Dave Mills
03-22-2010, 09:31 AM
Hi Mihail, Roman brought up a good point. Without the OOF backround stems the image would be cleaner and therefore stronger...

MIHAIL OBADA
03-22-2010, 09:32 AM
Hi Roman, thanks for looking and comments!
I believe that the two strains give the image more depth and feeling "old", "past", "outdated", (including that they are blurred) time suggested by the title itself. Course, they can very easily be extracted (even before hitting the shutter but the editor).
In my opinion the main elements are the first branch and spider web threads. Anyway, there are fixed eyes look. At least I think so.

MIHAIL OBADA
03-22-2010, 09:35 AM
Ah, Dave, sorry, we intersected. Thanks for commment!
I also agree with Roman's opinion and will try this option.

*For both: Excuse my horrible English!

Dave Mills
03-22-2010, 10:02 AM
Hi Mihail, I think your english is fine!

Robert Amoruso
03-23-2010, 10:18 AM
Mihail,

I am in agreement with Roman and Dave.

BTW, I understand you just fine.

MIHAIL OBADA
03-24-2010, 11:27 AM
Thanks Robert!

* Was afraid that I do not fully understand.