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john crookes
02-25-2008, 04:20 PM
Photographed on the Merrimack River in Newburyport MA while oul trying to photograph the local Eagles Nikon D3 with 400mm 2.8 and 2x ext f9.5 at 1/1000th and ISO 400

Lance Warley
02-25-2008, 04:25 PM
Beautiful, John.

Two suggestions: Pull back the whites on the neck and try to bring out the detail in the eye.

Arthur Morris
02-25-2008, 05:10 PM
Love the color of the water and the image design. The bird looks a tad oversharpened/contrasty from here.

later and love, artie

Jody Melanson
02-25-2008, 07:18 PM
Agree with Artie, I would pull back on the Contrast to help also improve the whites...

john crookes
02-25-2008, 07:33 PM
repost with contrast adjustment

It does look contrasty when posted before so adjusted

Terry Olmsted
02-25-2008, 10:06 PM
I think your original post has more punch, The whites look quite nice on my monitor. I do agree with Artie maybe just a bit less sharpening.

Taylor Yeager
02-25-2008, 10:41 PM
Version two looks much better! I think it may be even a bit more striking if you cropped some off the bottom. Maybe between the 2nd and 3rd head reflection. Also. very nice meeting you the other night.

Taylor