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Morkel Erasmus
03-18-2010, 01:36 PM
I took this portrait in the Kalahari last year. I blurred the BG some more to make the subject stand out.

All comments welcome!

Techs:
Canon 40D with 100-400mm L IS USM @ 400mm
f5.6 @ 1/250 SS @ ISO-800
Exp +0.3

Keith Carver
03-18-2010, 02:26 PM
Nice vertical portrait, Morkel. The bird looks just a little soft on my laptop, maybe could stand a couple rounds of light USM, would increase the pop even more.

Kaustubh Deshpande
03-18-2010, 02:38 PM
Morkel, comp is very nice. Liked the head angle too. But looks like there is subject shake. Since you were already at the aperture and usable-iso limits, only thing you could have done is increase SS and underexpose. but underexpose at iso 800 on 40D means too much noise.

Morkel Erasmus
03-18-2010, 02:58 PM
Thanks, I noticed the apparent softness upon uploading - although it didn't look as soft during processing. My hand and the 100-400 have proven sharp at even 1/100 @ 400mm so I guess it might be bird movement ;)

Here is a version that's sharpened a bit more...

Keith Carver
03-18-2010, 03:02 PM
Repost looks better...

Fabs Forns
03-18-2010, 05:57 PM
I'm sure it was bird moving with low shutter speed. Eye looks sharp though.

arash_hazeghi
03-18-2010, 11:40 PM
Like the pose and BG here Morkel but motion blur has softened details here. TFS

Mark Dumbleton
03-19-2010, 02:52 AM
I like this Morkel! Like the detail on the bird. The only thing bothering me is the slight halo around the bird - not from Sharpening but from blurring the BG, where the edge of the bird has been caught in the blur too.

Stu Bowie
03-19-2010, 03:04 AM
I like the colours and detail, and good job on the BG. The colours of the BG compliment the Korhaan nicely.

Morkel Erasmus
03-19-2010, 03:47 AM
thanks for the feedback guys. Mark I agree - I processed this a while ago and it was one of my first attempts at introducing additional BG blur :)