Red Top

[kostas nianiopoulos]

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1809/redtop.jpg (http://www.freecodesource.com/image-hosting/view/img411/1809/redtop.jpg/)

crop , a tad saturation , levels in mid tones , clone tool , pach tool , hi pass filter, box blur .

olympus e240 , 35mm zuiko macro , f22 , 1/60 , iso 400 .

thanks for watching .

[Randy Stout]

Kostas:

I like the colors and forms, but find the sharpness(DOF) and underlying shadows a bit distracting.
Perhaps a reflector with some fill for the underside might have evened it out a bit.

Will be interesting to see what the macro folks have to say. This is certainly not my normal area:)

Cheers

Randy

[Julie Kenward]

Randy nailed the two things I first noticed - it doesn't feel quite as sharp as it should be for f22 and the shadows are a little bothersome. Also - and this is probably the main thing for me - you've got a nice blurred BG but it doesn't seem to add much to the image as a whole. Maybe a less gray BG would be better? Or more color in the flower? I'm not quite sure.