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Bob Miller
03-09-2010, 02:54 PM
Taken right after a major storm blew through the Bombay Hook Refuge in DE....the light lasted only a few minutes
Nikon D-300
65mm
18-200mm lense
1/2000 sec at f 8
ISO 400
I know I did not think fast enough to lower my shutter speed...too excited!:o

MIHAIL OBADA
03-09-2010, 03:19 PM
Very rare occasions (moments) you have shoot. Very nice atmosphere and colors.

Myer Bornstein
03-09-2010, 07:47 PM
Nice colors, but I would crop out the water to dull

Robert Amoruso
03-10-2010, 12:46 PM
Bob,

Good layering with the colors and the rainbow in the BG icing on the cake. I agree with Myer that the water is dull in comparison to the grass but don't crop so much out you lose the FG layers due to the grass colors.

I would desaturate this some.

Dennis "Curly" Buchner
03-10-2010, 02:57 PM
nice colors and composition

Roman Kurywczak
03-12-2010, 02:44 PM
Hey Bob,
Another collaborative critique by Dave Mills and me........we both agred with the saturation point and the darkness of the water but mostly we felt that this would benefit from a crop on the rh side.....so we took some off...putting the rainbow in one of the vert ROT lines and took a bit off the top and bottom.....mostly to minimize the whites in the URC and try to retain the proportions. I did knock down the contrast of the grasses some and also lightened them just a touch. Overall, a pretty nice comp with some very innteresting storm colors.

Bob Miller
03-13-2010, 12:57 AM
Hi Roman and Dave....Thanks for the critique and showing me the potential of this image. Many good points made. I like the repost very much!
Yes, the colors were amazing that day!