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peter delaney
02-23-2008, 04:03 PM
dullstroom. south africa
taken a couple of years ago ..on my hassie xpan. wide angle lens..... fuji provia 100 .neg scanned....

David Kennedy
02-23-2008, 06:04 PM
Peter,
Cool location and the composition is very strong. Good use of the rule of thirds, interesting foreground, good placement of the horizon. The light is a little flat and makes the foreground and the background blend together a little too much. Some local contrast enhancement might help (USM filter at 20%, Radius 50, threshold 0).
Cheers,
David

peter delaney
02-24-2008, 12:01 AM
Thanks David...much appreciated..... ! will try it.

Robert Amoruso
02-24-2008, 08:18 AM
I am agreeing with David comments.

I might also liked to have seen a bit more FG of the slanted rocks which by the way as a diagonal element work well inthe image. I like the placement of the tree on the right as it adds visual interest and is balanced with a dark bush on the left.

peter delaney
02-24-2008, 02:37 PM
Thanks Robert,:)