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DanielTMiller
02-13-2010, 04:35 PM
http://danieltmiller.smugmug.com/Daniels-Photos/Places/Grampians/DSC3079/718709937_pF3o8-XL.jpg

This was taken on the side of a road on the way to Lake Fyans, this is actually a stormwater drain next to a bridge.

Nikon D60
18-55 VR
18mm
1/500th
f4.5
Cokin Grad ND8

Hope you like it.

David Thomasson
02-13-2010, 05:07 PM
I like this! Nicely composed. A very pleasing combination of colors, textures, lights & shadows. Nice capture. :cool:

A couple of editing ideas: Take out the bare branches at top left, crop a little off the bottom, and selectively sharpen the mid-range trees.

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/504/grampians.jpg

Katie Rupp
02-13-2010, 05:10 PM
Hi Daniel, I'm not any kind of a landscape expert but I can tell you that I like this image. The clouds, the light and vibrant color come together in that magical way you sometimes see for an instant before or after a storm...and you've caught it here.

Julie Brown
02-13-2010, 06:01 PM
Nice image Daniel. I'm no landscape expert either, but I like what David did.

DanielTMiller
02-13-2010, 06:20 PM
Thanks for taking the time to edit it David, it does look so much better than before, thanks Julie and Katie for the feedback.

Lance Peters
02-13-2010, 06:42 PM
Hi daniel - now you are getting up into my parts of the woods :)
Davids repsot certainly improves a already good base image.
Nice to see you using a ND8.
Keep em coming.

Dave Mills
02-13-2010, 09:51 PM
Hi Daniel, I started working on your image and then saw what David did. I agree with everything he suggested accept I would remove the little bit of tree on the upper left and right (if your inclined to do that)...Nice lighting along with an interesting comp...

Oscar Zangroniz
02-14-2010, 07:42 AM
Love your composition and colors. Techs covered, Great re post by David.

Jay Gould
02-14-2010, 08:23 AM
Very nice!

Mr. PS Magician always gets it right! For me, I might remove the "stuff" on the right as it encloses the space - what do you think? Here is a quick and dirty using the LR spot removal tool.