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Leander Khil
01-23-2010, 03:32 PM
http://www.khil.net/brambling_bpn.jpg
Brambling Fringilla montifringilla 21.1.2010
Nikon D300, 500/4 AF-S, ISO 200, f6.3, 1/320, fill-flash
Please feel free to comment and critique!
Gal Shon
01-23-2010, 03:48 PM
I love them, always a joy seeing them.
I like the BG, perch and the open beak.
The image as a glassy look, maybe its the strong flash with the sharpening.
Juan Carlos Vindas
01-23-2010, 07:01 PM
Welcome on board Leander. And what a start! lovely bird and image. Fill flash revealed the feather details great in here.
Axel Hildebrandt
01-24-2010, 08:04 AM
Good-looking specimen, eye contact, angle and BG. I might sharpen a bit less, give it a bit more room and it looks a bit overflashed as presented. Thanks for sharing!
P.S.: I added the 's' in the title.
Markus Jais
01-24-2010, 09:33 AM
Beautiful shot.I like the open bill. Very good BG. Good sharpness. I agree with Axel on it looking a little bid overflashed. But only a tiny little bit.
Markus
Mark Theriot
01-24-2010, 11:53 AM
Beautiful bird! Great detail and exposure.
Mark
Randy Stout
01-24-2010, 12:08 PM
Leander:
Nice bird, agree about the over flashed comments.
You might try about -1/3 on the exposure overall, put the perch on an adjustment layer and with curves bring it down even further, painting in with a soft brush to taste. I tried it, seems more natural to me.
Cheers
Randy
Leander Khil
01-24-2010, 01:29 PM
http://www.khil.net/brambling_bpn_repost2.jpg
Thanks a lot for all your constructive comments! I really appreciate it.
I processed it again, considering most of your points (toned down with curves, a little less sharpening)
What about this one? Does it still look over-flashed?
Randy Stout
01-24-2010, 02:14 PM
Leander:
IMO, a significant improvement. The perch can still go darker for my tastes, but the repost is certainly better.
Cheers
Randy
Morkel Erasmus
01-25-2010, 02:21 AM
repost works well! I would also look at lightening the beak a bit to keep it from blending in with the BG. pretty bird!
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