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Ilija Dukovski
12-14-2009, 11:13 PM
This is from last Sunday, Great Meadows in Concord, MA.
I went there to shoot ducks but the water was all frozen except
in not accessible areas. There were plenty of A. Tree Sparrows
around but I only managed to get this little guy.
Very cold and partly overcast morning...

Here I used fill flash and warmed the image in ACR.
CC appreciated.

Nikon D80 300mm+TC1.4 f/5.6 1/250 MatrixAP+2/3 ISO400 FillFlash used @ -1 1/3

Danny J Brown
12-14-2009, 11:43 PM
Hi Ilija - Nice song sparrow in golden, morning light. The frost really makes it special. I take a lot of sparrow shots and the song sparrow is one of my favorites. Also, the white-throated sparrow. I like the way you left head room for the vertical reeds. Sweet shot of this little puff ball.

Amy Marques
12-15-2009, 12:02 AM
I love the habitat showing and the delicate dusting of snow on the perch. Great job!

Harshad Barve
12-15-2009, 04:36 AM
Lovely pose , nice habitat , snow and spot on compo works very well here
TFS

Daniel Cadieux
12-15-2009, 05:50 AM
You did a good job warming the image...it makes a nice contrast with the frost. Good pose by the sparrow too. At first I was questioning the comp, but I have to admit it is now growing on me. Another option would have been an horizontal with more room at left and less above.

arash_hazeghi
12-15-2009, 06:16 AM
I like the habitat and the snow on the perch but I am not crazy about the placement of the bird in the frame.

denise ippolito
12-15-2009, 07:48 AM
Ilija, The frost looks great. I like the vertical reeds, they add some interest and habitat. The fluffed up look and pose on the sparrow is nice.

Kiran Poonacha
12-15-2009, 11:16 AM
Lovely one, nicly showing habitat, nice light and pose....

Rodney Flowers
12-15-2009, 01:01 PM
I like the frost and the reeds in the background. I would have preferred it if the reed were not coming directly out of the birds head.

Ákos Lumnitzer
12-15-2009, 07:39 PM
Comp is good Ilija. I'd sharpen the bird a little more. Congrats! :)

Dan Busby
12-15-2009, 10:53 PM
Ilija - I love the browns in this image. The darker colors really draw one to the head and eye - which makes it a successful image. When I look at this one I have to shake my head so I don't make the bird into a marsh Wren!

Dave Blinder
12-15-2009, 11:37 PM
Great pose! Curious if this is a large crop? Details seem a bit muted, especially on the face.

Ilija Dukovski
12-16-2009, 10:10 AM
Thank you for the comments, appreciated.

Ilija Dukovski
12-16-2009, 10:13 AM
Another option would have been an horizontal with more room at left and less above.

Yes, agree with you Dan, I had a mess of reeds here so I wanted to make the verticals the main BG feature here
to take the attention away from it.

Ilija Dukovski
12-16-2009, 10:14 AM
I am not crazy about the placement of the bird in the frame.

Fair enough, horizontal frame as Dan sugested was another option.

Ilija Dukovski
12-16-2009, 10:15 AM
I would have preferred it if the reed were not coming directly out of the birds head.

Good point.

Ilija Dukovski
12-16-2009, 10:16 AM
Curious if this is a large crop?

Not too large, about 1/2 of the image.