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Zoltan Kovacs
12-13-2009, 02:07 AM
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Bearded reedling (Panurus biarmicus)
EOS40D+EF 400/5.6+2xTC; 1/800s f/11.0 iso400
Welcome every C&C
Juan Aragonés
12-13-2009, 02:57 AM
Zoltan with such an intense light the whites looks a bit bright to my taste. You have some hot pixels in the red channel (about 5000 pixels in the levels 254-255) and that could explain the reason why the whites looks bright. The Bg is very rich in red and it seems to be a bit light (see the histogram of the red channel). It would be very easy to tone down a bit during the RAW conversion. Details in the plumage are superb and the eye is just fantastic. I am not sure about the shadow of the grasses in the rump of the bird. I have no experience with the lens and converter that you are using but it seems that you have done a terrific job with the 2XTC
Hope this help to improve this excelent image :)
Steve Kaluski
12-13-2009, 03:51 AM
Hi Zoltan, I would agree with Juan's suggestion, however it does look rather over sharpened to me. Sill a nice looking bird.
Steve
Harshad Barve
12-13-2009, 06:12 AM
Zoltan , I think Juan nailed the C C here but my god what a good looking species this is , terrific
TFS
Axel Hildebrandt
12-13-2009, 06:37 AM
I really like seeing images of this species, pose eye contact and BG look good. Sharpness looks good on my monitor. I agree regarding toning down the highlights and wish the grass in front of the tail were not there.
Ofer Levy
12-13-2009, 08:55 AM
Beautiful image. Exposure looks spot on to me - the two feathers on the back look a bit hot but the rest of the bird looks great. I don't see any over sharpening. I also don't mind the reed in front of the tail as it gives the image a natural feel. Would not change a thing.
David Fletcher
12-13-2009, 09:43 AM
Beautiful shot Zoltan. Sharpness looks good on my monitor too. With Ofer on the shadow. part of the habitat and wouldn't change it either. Nicely done.
kenn threed
12-13-2009, 10:53 AM
Zoltan , I think Juan nailed the C C here but my god what a good looking species this is , terrific
TFS
Agreed on both points.
This image will still be strikingly beautiful after toning down the brightest parts.
gorgeous bird, excellently captured.
Kenn
Brian Barcelos
12-13-2009, 11:47 AM
Can't really add to the excellent advice already given but want to thank you for letting me see this beautiful species. This image has lots of potential with a little work. Congrats
Zoltan Kovacs
12-13-2009, 01:00 PM
Thanks for all comments. I tried to down the brightest parts.
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2008/mg3244cca.jpg
Regards,
Zoltan
Ákos Lumnitzer
12-14-2009, 01:31 AM
Zoli,
I like it as is. Wonderful image. Sharp for the 2x combo.
Harshad, when will you formulate your own critique instead of agreeing with others? ;)
Kiran Poonacha
12-14-2009, 05:12 AM
just loved the bird, nice light too,,
Nagesh Mula
12-14-2009, 04:17 PM
Zoltan, its a beautiful bird and its pose is well captured.
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