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Jan Fourie
12-12-2009, 11:39 AM
Taken at Shakawa,okavango,Botswana
Camera :canon 1 D mark 111
Lens :canon 500mm f4
ISO ;1000
f/9
exp +1/3
Shutter speed 1/2000

Harshad Barve
12-12-2009, 11:43 AM
spectacular image , lovely position of bird and killer BG , nice to have meal in beak
TFS

Luis Villablanca
12-12-2009, 12:06 PM
Wow, great catch! I love the pose and wing position, composition, action and background.
I may be mistaken, but I notice some traces of oversharpening under the wing.

Daniel Cadieux
12-12-2009, 12:28 PM
Nice wings up pose, just wish it wasn't flying away from you. A few PP artefacts are visible, such as cloning marks above and below the tail (and a few more here and there along the frame's edges). The primaries also look cut-out from post-processing. Bird looks overly NR'd. Thanks for sharing this very colourful fella with a bonus meal!

Loukie Viljoen
12-12-2009, 12:30 PM
Jan you have lost feather detail big time, ? noise reduction? Groete loukie

Gerrie van Vuuren
12-12-2009, 12:49 PM
Great timing, posture & BG. Catch a bonus. Ditto Loukie on detail & also a halo around the bird?

Danny Laredo
12-12-2009, 01:26 PM
Sweet image, love the Bg and the bug.
Agree with the remarks already mentioned.

Jan Fourie
12-12-2009, 01:27 PM
Jan you have lost feather detail big time, ? noise reduction? Groete loukie
thnks loukie
jan

Jan Fourie
12-12-2009, 02:11 PM
have reposted the image to get halo out
jan

Arthur Morris
12-12-2009, 04:11 PM
Not sure if you intended to but you have reduced the SAT of the REDs on the neck, throat and breast and that is a huge improvement as they were over-SATURATED in Pane #1. The major flaw that keeps this from being a contest winner is the fact that the bird was angling slightly away from you; this has caused the face to go dark.

IAC, a remarkable capture. And the repost is far better overall.

Danny Laredo
12-12-2009, 04:13 PM
The repost looks great and a vast improvment.

Ofer Levy
12-12-2009, 05:48 PM
I much prefer the original. I don't see any noticeable halo, colours are much nicer and natural IMO and composition is nicer as in the repost you cropped off the right. I do see the issue with the primaries though. I think this is an award winning capture for sure. Congratulations!

Marc Mol
12-12-2009, 06:11 PM
One of my favorite African birds Jan, well timed. Have found you need SS of 1/2500+ to get complete wing freeze with these guys, also your reds are still a little over saturated. Lovely in flight image nonetheless.

Juan Carlos Vindas
12-12-2009, 09:58 PM
Wonderful bird. Love the fact that you were able to capture it with its pray. I agree about the bird been flying away and a bit over sat. but the repost looks better.

Jan Fourie
12-13-2009, 02:29 AM
thnks for your valuable comments and crits this is how we can improve our images
jan

Kiran Poonacha
12-14-2009, 05:57 AM
Loved the repost, great catch this, nice light and details here...