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Kaustubh Deshpande
12-11-2009, 04:31 PM
http://gallery.photo.net/photo/10332893-lg.jpg

40D. 400 f/5.6. iso 400. f/7.1. 1/1000. exp. comp +2/3. almost full frame. contrast and color temp.adjustment in DPP. Light angle was not the best....but not too bad either.

All opinions welcome.

Daniel Cadieux
12-11-2009, 04:43 PM
I like the colours here - the BG looks very nice. Good HA. Darkening the pupil would be a good thing to do. Interesting comp...I think it works well despite so little of the body being included.

Jim Fenton
12-11-2009, 04:59 PM
Love the background and pose.

Exposure looks great. Actually, rather than darkening the eye as Daniel suggested, I might try just a little curves and a bit more sharpening on it?

Also, the neck itself perhaps was behind the plane of focus (or towards the back end of it) and you might do a little selective sharpening there?

Daniel Cadieux
12-11-2009, 05:01 PM
Jim, it's not whole eye I'd like to see darkened...just the pupil (including removing the lighter spot in it).

Jim Fenton
12-11-2009, 05:01 PM
Aaaah....

I guess I should read more closely!

Kaustubh Deshpande
12-11-2009, 05:05 PM
Thx for taking the time guys. I will try that. will wait for other suggestions as well.

Daniel, I also have "just the neck and head" shot that I got after taking a few steps closer( yes...very cooperative dude) but I liked this comp with the little bit of body.

denise ippolito
12-11-2009, 06:02 PM
Kaustubh, The BG colors really addto this. The head angle is nice and the image is sharp.

Nagesh Mula
12-11-2009, 07:01 PM
Kaustubh, an excellent BKGR can make even common bird look amazing and thats what happened here.
Good exposure and sharpness. However I do feel a slight more inclusion of body would have made this pic from good to very good.

Kaustubh Deshpande
12-11-2009, 07:45 PM
Here's the vertical frame I captured after moving in a few steps closer. Some might like it more.

http://gallery.photo.net/photo/10335187-lg.jpg

Kiran Poonacha
12-12-2009, 01:32 AM
The repost works well KD, nice HA and Bg adds well...

Harshad Barve
12-12-2009, 03:07 AM
KD
Vertical frame is terrific , lovely HA , details , pose and killer BG
TFS